Love it! The Mise en scÃ¨ne works really well, making the depicted scenes perfectly clear, while retaining a hint of abnormity. The character design is powerful (the wife's eyebrows lol), and I like the way the panels are arranged. My general impression is you knew exactly what you did when drew this. Storywise I am intrigued to the max!!! Where/when is/will be the rest of this?
You can find the rest of the comic here: http://middlefingerrings.newgrounds.com/art/
Thanks for reading!
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