Nice work. I especially like how you matched the whistling sound in the music with the character animation and the anime/manga like short switches of the overall drawing style. Nice dramaturgy with the montage, nothing too long or too short. Only reason why I don't give a ten, is that the general topic might be a little played out respectively there is room for a bit more relevancy storywise. But the twist in the end hasn't been done yet as far as i know so great work.
Regarding Dojang's comment I agree with Lenteja.
This was quite well animated, with nice camera angles and stuff, didn't really like the drawing style which looked a little sloppy. The story is quite wtf. That's supposed to be the madness guy??? He doesn't even shoot??? This is quite an newgrounds - self referential thing, I don't think it's sensible to mess around with the characters like that.
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